First Draft

Progress Log (Draft Feedback)- 10/12/15

After looking at our first draft and getting feedback, we need to think about using more shots and try to use shorter shot types. This will also tie into helping to gain more marks on the editing and will also help to portray the story line. We also need to look at the screen time that each band member gets, at the moment it seems that the drummer is the lead singer.

Progress log 01/12/15

Today we started to add in more effects and clips, so that the blank gaps are being filled. I have also nearly completed my first draft of the digipak and the poster.